it spend a month when I came New York. i'd keep Exciting days with REGGAE music. thank jah!! but! i don't talk in English yet.. just a littele bit. that's Tekitoh English!! i have to talk more,more,mooooreeee!!
well, at last Sunday, i went to "Caribbean Fashion Rocks" in Manhattan but i had just a few info of that. i got there, waited in matrix, through the Security, and then the Casher man said me "have u ticket?", i said "yes i haven't", cashman said "alright, u pay $40"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i paid $40(it can buy 48Budweisers!) n' entered inside. there has people who are sensitive in fashion. i am the one of them, haha.. After 30 min, there behaved some food what style in buffet for fashionista. yeah, i ate that i feel my stomach seemed to tear!! Furthermore after 1 hour, we had attend to down floor. Moreover, and the 1 hour further, finaly, the show started. the Time was 9:20pm.yo!! what it written on Flyer?? well, such a thing always happened in New York. anyway, that's ok that i enjoyed the show n' i can linked up people.
Riddim Driven. wicked!!
yo, please show me clothes?
yeeeeaaaah!! bullet! bullet!!
wiz designer. cool
carry.
she is a daughter the mam were next to me.
beautifulest in the CFR!!
nice brand!!
この日最も会場をbossってたのがこのおっちゃん。
めちゃくちゃ音に乗りながらshoes(たぶんclarks)を魅せつけてた。
Maaaaaaddddddd!!!!
シルエットでbossり具合がわかるっしょ？
at Last..
aftar this event, i went to Fire Sunday. so i heard live of Gappy Ranks twice in that day. he has good vibes. such like a Jah Cure. Jah Cure is innocence, Jah know.
Bless
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hellooo!!おっひさー元気してる？呑んでる？絶好調？
はい、とゆーわけで赤ペン先生おそばせながら登場じゃじゃじゃじゃーん。ブログの雰囲気が変わってて一瞬間違えたとおもったわー$20が157枚くらい？欲っしいね〜
さっそくですね、２行目！it spend a month when I came New York.ですが、「nyに来てから１ヶ月絶ちましたー」ってことだよね？whenだと”〜の時”ってなっちゃうから、”〜から”って言いたいときは”A month has passed since I came to ny ”の方がいいかも。spendでも時間の経過を過ごしたってことに使うから間違ってはないよ！
んーあとtalkとspeakの違い、、かな。3,4行めのtalkはspeakのがいいとおもいますーtalkって相手がいて会話するってかんじ。あ、詳しくはここでちぇきてみて笑☆http://www.englishcafe.jp/answer/and-1g.html
あとは動詞の時制だったりa,an,the,to,in,atっとかの細かいとこっすかねー
って長い！！このコメント中途半端に真面目で長いしきもい！！ww
しかしいい感じのshowじゃなーい！いいねいーne!!!
ビアガーデン行こうよ！そんな時は呑もう！そーだそーだ！yayyy chao<3
to 8theta8
welcome back Teacher!!AZS for u checked my grammar. 日々精進します。ちなむと$20は178枚です。$3560..こんなんはした金だろ。
ってくらいになりませうteacher!! I wanna go to BEER garden too!
hahaわざわざメールまでwはい、すいませう。てきと−teacherでした。反省します！
じゃあ間違い探しだけするでーん！
L5:at last Sundayのatはいりません。
L6:info of thatのofはaboutで。
L7:waited in matrixってどゆ意味？matrixって店？
L7-8:the Casher manはa casher man
L8:said me "have u ticket?"はsaid to meかasked me
L12:there has peopleはthere were people
L13-14:there behaved some food what style in buffet for fashionista.の文章は。。うーん。やり直しでw特にthere behavedの所。
L14-15: i ate that i feel my stomach seemed to tear!!はi ate thatとi feel~の２つの節の間に接続詞が必要です。and とかthenとか。あと過去形だからfeelはfeltで。
L19:what it written on Flyer??はwhat it is written
L19-20:such a thing always happenedはalwaysつかってるから現在形のhappens
L21:i can linked up peopleは過去形でi could link up
wiz designerはwiz a designerかwiz the designerかwiz designers
儲かりましたー！あざす！がんばれ！！！！bless you!!!
to 8theta8
AZS again!!
煽ってサーセンしたww 13 quarter貯めときmassive!!
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